Today everyone watched everyones music videos individually and gave some constructive critisism on them, this is the feedback we recieved as a group:
Positive
- use of shots
-fading shots work well together
-great atmosphere and composition
-like the background being fast and emma being normal
-atmosphere fits song
-good lip synching
- great opening shot
- nice use of props
-great shot of cards
-feels like a music video already, first chorus made me smile
-variety of shots
-scene set up well
-like the night theme
-amazing opening!
-costume
-tree with lights is amazing
-i like how the footage blurs then focuses.
improvemets and weaknesses.
-too dark in some places ( we could try using an effect to help this)
-need less movement from singer ( we cant really do anyhting about that now, but work around it)
-Emma giggling, or lip synching of ( the 'giggling shots we can always use for cutaways, and the cutaways still need using)
-add more cut aways
-use effects to make shots look brighter
-some bits preformer isnt convincing ( we are covering these bits up with cut aways like i said before)
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