Pete's feedback for Rough Cut.

This morning Pete came round our groups individually and gave us some feedback. I was the only one in my group there for the feedback so i've got to tell Rob and Christina the areas we need to improve.

The areas that Pete liked were:

- the imagery

- the way we've covered the blurry shots

- the band performance set up

- the fast scene

- the characters shots

- opening shot

Areas for improvement:

- shots need to be shorter

- need to get rid of shots where i look down

- needs more cutaways

- needs to get rid of blurry shots or distort them

Me and Pete had the same ideas for improvement and i think that my group should be able to fix any problems by friday.